The first thing you half to do if you want to write an essay is to get a thesis statement. But, you can’t just get it from time and space you have to list down different possible ideas, like things you observe, places you have been, important people, stuff you are good at, maybe even in other books you wrote and stuff that are very important to you.
l Sometimes you might wonder why write essays?? The reason for that is that essays prove things. For example I am writing a essay about why Nike is better than New Balance then you will have to write things to prove it like Nike is better than New Balance because Nike is better qualitey, something like that. Essays are not like stories because they are non fiction and they do not have beginning middle and end. Essays also have bullet points, the way you use them is like this, you take your thesis and you think of ideas to support it then you take those bullet points and write supporting ideas. After you can’t think of anything else you can interview other people, ask them questions, and you have many quotes connected to yor thesis. You can send out a survey to many people, when you get the answer you can write it down. in a thesis statement is something you believe your thesis has to mean something to you if your thesis statement was Abraham linken was a bad president and you didn’t know any supporting ideas than this thesis is not very good for you if you have many supporting ideas than this thesis is very good for you.but you half to be careful if you have four bullet point make sure they are all giving different massages if you read them carefully they might be saying the same thing but in different words.in essays you just make things up things will half to be real if you put in quotes then you have to say that the person did it and you should try saying the quotes in the exactly what the person you asked said and if you ask some one that is really involved in your thesis then it will get people to believe even more for example my thesis is dogs are better pets than cats and i ask someone who is a veterinarian than people will really believe you it is better proof than your friend now you think what is the difference between a interview and a quote the difference is that in an interview you ask qustions and in quotes you ask people about there opinion on your thesis when you have a quote you can not make it up an essay is about proveing your thesis without that it would not be an essay it would just be a boring non fiction book the beggining of an essay has to be kind of catchy it can not like this this is an essay and here are my thesis staetment blah blah blah it needs to intresting if not then people would just glance at your paper read the beggining and if the beggining is not intresting then noone would go near your paper the ending of your essay is also importent because if you ended like this good essays are like the one you just read that would not be a very satistfing essay ending in real essay writing the eend is call the conclusion a better essay ending or conclusion is here are my reasons of blah blah blah do you think i did good on telling you how to write an essay because i pesonally think i did pretty good period.









WOW!!
You are a person who writes in lots of detail!!!
You write clearly so the person understands. (You wrote a lot!!!)
I think your description would be better if you used words that have the same meaning. (Example: non-fiction could be true stories.)
Question!! Why did you made some of the words bold-faced?
Liz
blah blah blah that is very funny!